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December 1, 2008
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This came to me rather quickly last night, so I ran with it and wrote it in one shot. I didn't overthink it so I hope you won't either. Feedback welcome!
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:icondrewbiwans123:
sooooooo seeeeeexxxxyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconstargatefreak:
so....she killed herself and enjoyed it?!
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~Inflate123 Nov 9, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
If that's how you choose to read it, that's fine, but it's not the only interpretation.

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:iconinvizking:
This was a most enjoyable read, thank you for sharing it with the rest of the class! Your depiction of her struggles turning to joy flowed splendidly. The quasi-ambiguous ending made me feel all warm and happy. It's fantastic to see new writing from you.

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:iconhercmech:
Great! Love the story even though popping isn't my thing.
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:icongoober84:
Very good! inflation comes accross much better when its contained (to a certain extent) in clothing! I was hoping shed do to the prom and have an accident but meh thats me not you!!

Good job a solid 8 out of 10!!!

Yay go you!!
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:icontheartificer:
Nice to see some new work from you.

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:iconsinopsis:
Haha...

I'm not whether it bares interpretation or if I should just laugh. Going from not wanting permanent surgery to willingly blowing her own body up with a mechanical pump...

Strange suicidal reaction to physical aesthetic...

Caught in a moment that seems to go against her thought out inclinations... natural inclinations are maladjusted. Curious character.

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I will not waste my days trying to prolong them.
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~Inflate123 Dec 5, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Overthinking +1

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not sure you can overthink purposefully making yourself explode with a pump... might get lost in the the orgasm along the way... but still... it's complex.

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